AI fixed my writing ✏️
Today, I attended a Christmas wreath workshop with my family at a shopping mall near our home.
To join the workshop, participants had to show a receipt proving they had spent more than 1,000 yen at the mall.
Original one ✏️
Today I attend to the workshop to make Christmas wreath with my family at a shopping mall near our place.
The condition to attend the workshop is that attendees have to show a receipt of buying stuff, whose price over 1000 yen, at the shopping mall.
Improvement Points By AI
Use the correct past tense (“attended”) when describing events that already happened.
Avoid incorrect prepositions (“attend a workshop,” not “attend to a workshop”).
Use articles and plural forms properly (“a Christmas wreath”).
Simplify complex conditions with natural structures (“To join the workshop…”).
Replace awkward phrases with idiomatic expressions (“spent more than 1,000 yen”).