AI fixed my writing ✏️
Today, we had a great time watching a mochi-tsuki event and some stage performances in front of a nearby station. Mochi-tsuki is actually quite hard to explain in English, by the way.
In Tokyo, there are many shotengai—shopping streets—centered around train stations. These streets usually have their own organizations made up of local shops.
Today’s event was organized by one of those groups. As part of a first-come, first-served offer, we received some freshly made mochi. It was very soft and delicious.
Original one ✏️
We had a fun time to see mochi-tsuki and some stage shows in front of a station today. It's so hard to explain about mochi-tsuki, by the way.
There are a lot of "Sho-ten-gai", shopping street, where is centered around a statin in Tokyo.
They have organization which is founded by some stores in shopping street.
Today's event was held by their.
We got some omochi they made as firs-come firs-recieved. That was good taste and soft.
Improvement Points By AI
Use “had fun watching” instead of “had a fun time to see.”
Remove unnecessary prepositions (“explain mochi-tsuki,” not “explain about”).
Fix relative clauses and plural forms (“that are centered around stations”).
Use natural organizational phrasing (“organizations made up of local shops”).
Correct pronouns and verb choices (“organized by them”).
Use idiomatic expressions (“first-come, first-served,” “freshly made mochi”).
Describe food naturally (“soft and delicious,” “tasted good”).