My throat...

Teruhisa
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公開:2025/12/23

AI fixed my writing ✏️

My cough is still lingering a little… unfortunately.

The symptoms aren’t as bad as the worst ones I’ve had over the past few years. When it gets really bad, my lungs hurt and even my abdominal muscles start to ache.

I think the main reason is post-nasal drip, which causes clear, colorless phlegm to stick in my throat. I really hope this clears up soon.


Original one ✏️

My cough has been lingering little yet...yet...

The symptom is not worse than before I had in few years. When it's terrible, my lung hurts and stomach muscle does too.

(プラス)

後鼻漏のせいで喉に無色透明の痰が絡んでるせいなので早くこれが治ってほしい。


Improvement Points By AI

  • Fix word order and remove unnatural repetition (“lingering a little,” no repeated “yet”).

  • Use correct plural forms and natural time expressions (“symptoms,” “over the past few years”).

  • Describe pain with natural verbs and parallel structure (“lungs hurt,” “muscles ache”).

  • Use accurate medical terminology (“post-nasal drip”) and clear descriptive language.

ひとこと

最後の文章は流石に言えないと思ったけど、"post-nasal drip"は知らなかったとは言え、英文読むとそんなでもなくてなんか落ち込む。

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