AI fixed my writing ✏️
My second son goes to kindergarten on weekdays, and they enjoy seasonal events a few times a year.
Today, the children received gifts from “Santa Claus,” who was actually a kindergarten staff member dressed up as Santa.
After my son came home, I said to him, “Oh, you got a gift from Santa? That’s nice!”
Then he replied, “Yes! But Santa already came to the kindergarten, so he won’t come to our home at Christmas…”
What a pure-hearted boy he is!
Original one ✏️
My second son goes a kindergarten weekdays. They enjoy seasonal event sometimes in year.
Today they are received gifts from "Santa Claus" which is a kindergarten staff dressed up.
After my son came back home, I said "Oh you received gifts from Santa? Nice!" to him. Then, he said "Yes! But Santa came the kindergarten so he won't come my home at Christmas...".
What a pure boy he is!
Improvement Points By AI
Add missing prepositions and articles (“goes to kindergarten,” “a staff member”).
Use natural time and frequency expressions (“on weekdays,” “a few times a year”).
Fix verb tense and voice (“received,” not “are received”).
Improve sentence flow and clarity in relative clauses.
Adjust dialogue to sound natural and childlike in English.
Use more idiomatic adjectives (“pure-hearted,” “innocent”).