Shoulder blades

Teruhisa
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公開:2025/12/11

AI fixed my writing ✏️

Anyway, my upper back around the shoulder blades has also been hurting since I got sick, and I have no idea why.

I really want to go to my usual orthopedic clinic, but I can’t because I’m still coughing and don’t want to trouble anyone there.


Original one ✏️

Anyway, my back, which is around shoulder blades, has pain as the same time as having been sick.

I don't know why it happened.

I really want to go the orthopedic clinic where is my go-to place however I can't do because I have cough.


Improvement Points By AI

  • Use natural expressions for symptoms (“has been hurting” instead of “has pain”).

  • Add necessary articles (“the shoulder blades,” “the orthopedic clinic”).

  • Simplify complex relative clauses (“the clinic I usually go to”).

  • Use correct prepositions (“go to”).

  • Replace unnatural medical phrasing (“I have cough”) with “I’m coughing.”

  • Combine related sentences smoothly for natural flow (“… has been hurting, and I have no idea why”).

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