AI fixed my writing ✏️
My cough has been lingering, but that doesn’t mean I can pass my cold on to others.
Tonight, I went out to a bonenkai (year-end party) to meet good friends and have some beers, even though I’ve been sick.
We had a great time wrapping up the year together. I hope everyone stays healthy, and that I’m still feeling okay tomorrow.
Original one ✏️
My coughing have been continuing but it doesn’t mean that it can’t be pass my cold on to anyone.
Tonight I went to meet good friends in Bo-nen-kai(忘年会) and drink beer after getting cold.
We had a fun time end of this year. I hope they are keeping to be healthy and my body still be ok tomorrow.
Improvement Points By AI
Fix subject–verb agreement and verb forms (“has been,” “can pass”).
Use correct prepositions for events (“at a bonenkai”).
Replace unnatural phrases with idiomatic expressions (“had a great time,” “stay healthy”).
Improve clarity around health conditions and timing (“even though I’ve been sick”).
Use natural expressions for physical condition (“I’m still feeling okay”).